One of the biggest struggles I had (and still have even at the time of writing this) when drawing these pages were consistency and quality of character faces, especially the second panel which I remember getting quite a bit of (constructive) criticism for.

Much like what I did for Prologue Page 5, I redrew this page using another half-weekend in late April 2016. With two redrawn pages in direct comparison with the originals, I like to think I have made some progress. :p